Not bad! Might use some arpeggio to replace parts where the lead repeats rapidly. More instruments would be great.

One of the few times I discover a beautiful song without being so late. I actually feel touched listening to this.

Sounds really calmingful. The Western-Asian style (I suppose) melody at 1:06 is just incredible! I absolutely love this track.

I thought about pog face while looking at this
now I can't unsee it